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If you are curious about what is going on in the scene, here is a little background. Trezl is an elf whose home is an elven city in the middle of Nemus Forest, the largest forest on the continent of Ryndaria. Trezl and his three friends (Ralhin, Ao, Sembaar) left the city recently to train in the wilds of the forest with their teacher, Dhenir. The young adult elves are expected to be ready to serve and defend their people. While on their way back home, the city is attacked and the small group finds themselves trying to infiltrate their home and help defend it from an unknown force.
The scene starts as the small troop comes upon four creatures they do not recognize.
For those reviewing it for me, here are some questions I would like you to think of while reading:
- Is it enjoyable?
- How is the pacing? Too fast, too slow, inconsistent? Does it take away from the reading?
- Grammar issues?
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